Poem: true fool – 24/11/21

’emote’ 2021 by Lauren M. Hancock copyright 2021

from the depths of my soul
from the gateways of my being
I shudder with anger
distilling through me
its not purely the behaviour that perturbs
it’s the repeat offending that I know will remain
present and untoward
some will never change
this I hold true
pity me for believing:
I am a true fool.
Copyright © 2021 Lauren M. Hancock. All rights reserved.

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15 responses to “Poem: true fool – 24/11/21”

  1. I hear u Avatar

    Such am artistic piece

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    1. Lauren M. Hancock Avatar

      Thank you very much! 🙂 ❤

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      1. I hear u Avatar

        no need dear

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  2. GraceoftheSun Avatar

    Wonderful as always, dear Lauren. Truly enjoyed.💕

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    1. Lauren M. Hancock Avatar

      Thank you, lovely Grace, your continued readership and supportive comments mean the world to me. ❤ Much appreciated ❤ 🙂

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      1. GraceoftheSun Avatar

        My pleasure, dear Lauren.💕

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  3. Jeff Flesch Avatar

    There Is much sadness in this piece, yet also much clarity. It’s a beautiful poem, dearest Lauren. ❤️🥰

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    1. Lauren M. Hancock Avatar

      Thank you, dear Jeff. Yes, much emotion was experienced when I penned this but writing it made me feel better afterwards too. 💜

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      1. Jeff Flesch Avatar

        You’re welcome, dearest Lauren. Ah, I understand this experience very well. 💙

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  4. Navin Avatar

    Such a beautiful poem & title, Lauren…quite relatable as well…lovely art ✨❤️💫

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    1. Lauren M. Hancock Avatar

      Thank you so much, Navin, very much appreciated! 💕 💜

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      1. Navin Avatar

        You’re very welcome, Lauren ✨💟💫

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